A stare into the past. (SERIES)

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#27

Sorry for the lack of chapters in the past 4 days. I’ll take my time to make one. I am not being forced I just want to do stuff I want which takes my time and I don’t bother writing.


#28

The long awaited chapter two

A stare into the past chapter two


Meanwhile
The rector scale detects an earthquake
???: sir, an earthquake has been detected in New York. Blocksvile to be persist.
???: let’s wait for it to end and then we will send a team to investigate.
???: yes sir.
Back at majic jungle studios random office building


Emily: I’ll just have to stay in this tiny thing while the building is swaying
Emily: oh boy

the buildings 5th floor stars cracking
Emily: oh no I am screwed.
**the earthquake chills down and stops.
Emily: is everything fine?
explosion is heard by Emily in the distance
Emily: is it safe to come out now. Well I guess
emily clicks the elevator button but it doesn’t work
Emily: dang it. Doesn’t work. I guess I have to take the stairs
Emily: this hallway is scary and oh I see the stairs in the distance
floor could be heard collapsing onto the third floor
Emily: woah!

dust and debris fly all over the air
Emily: dang it. cough cough
Emily: I think I see the stairs
Emily: I hate using the stairs but in this case I can’t use the elevator for obvious reasons so.

Emily: two floors to go.
Emily: and done. Time to get out of the office building.
emily walks out of the office

Emily: Huh what was that?
Emily: stay back.
???: Huh?
Emily: oh it’s just a human.
???: I think we have a survivor of the earthquake.
???: good, good. Now we can get them to our place so we can keep them safe while executi- I mean caring for them.
???: sorry about that. By the way my name is Landon. What’s yours?
Emily: uh, uh, uh. Emily?
Landon: Emily, seems familiar. But hello.
Emily: I, I have to tell you something.
Landon: what is it.
Emily: I’m, I’m, I’m in lov-
explosion could be heard a mile away
Landon: man, second explosion today. I’ll be right back. In a minute
Emily: okay
Landon runs to the scene
Landon: this is the second explosion today. I am going to use my time crystals
emily looks into the distance and sees a tsunami in the distance
Emily: oh boy what should I do.

  • Run to save Landon
  • Head for safety

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Chapter two end


#29

Screw it. We run solo in the apocalypse :cool:


#30

Okay. Lol

Anyway I’m going to bed, I’ll see you tomorrow but chapter three may have something you may like if you wish. It will be the longest to be posted in the series for a while or in its history.

I’m not going to provide too much info but this series may be a 20-40 chapter series.


#31

This will probably be a weekly thing.


#32

OK. Aww


#33

Getting images made is hard work. I hope to have it done by today or tomorrow.


#34

I have to completely agree.


#35

It really is. I’m amazed that Jamie (Legend of Maxx guy)) makes the stories in up to 7 hours, for 3 times as many images


#36

A stare into the past chapter three

Emily: this is not good. A tsunami is coming
Emily: what am I supposed to do about Landon.
Emily: I can’t save him because I risk death trying to save him so I hope he makes it but I got to get into the building and fast.
emily runs to the building and opens the door
Emily: c’mon I need to get upstairs.
the glass shatters due to the water
Emily: woah!!
the stairs get washed by the water


Emily: oh my gosh I almost could have gone spinning out of control.
Emily: what about Landon, how is he doing and is he alive


Landon: ugh this water is too powerful. I hate tsunamis.


Emily: I can’t leave Landon to die like this. I need to figure out how to get to him but how.
emily looks to find wood and linen
Emily: I think I may have gotten an idea.
emily crafts a craftbench
Emily: eek. No limestone. Oh here’s some
emily upgrades the bench and crafts a boat
Emily: I need to shatter the glass but how?
emily finds a pickaxe
Emily: oh there’s a tool
emily throws the pickaxe into the glass breaking the entire wall

Emily: and done placing the boat. Now time to save Landon


Landon: I think this is it for me. I am going to spin around with no portals around, goodbye blockheads.
Emily: Landon!
Landon: Emily. Is that you?
Emily: yes. I have crafted a boat. Get on Landon
Landon: okay Emily
emily stops her boat
Landon: and there.
Emily: glad your alive. I thought I would have lost you.
Landon: I thought you died too. I almost drowned into spinning.
Emily: so are we going to be safe.
Landon: Idk, idk.


A few hours later

Emily: and done. The Fire is done.
Landon: so Emily. How’s life been here.
Emily: pretty good, how about you?
Landon: nothing really much. I have lots of work. But thanks
Emily: your welcome Landon. If you need anything feel free to ask.
Landon: oh I just want to know what the cities past and stuff was like.
Emily: oh… that’s hard, how about see that lake. It may have gold in it and a dawn of the war book somewhere.
Landon: oh… I guess you don’t want to tell.
Emily: are you sure you want to hear it. It may be harsh
Landon: I guess but go ahead.


Emily: well here I go Landon… this is going to be hard


Emily: a long time ago… in 1934-1937 a person in the name of Justin bought the land during the the great depression. Originally it was testing land for bombs that was so polluted nobody wanted it. But Justin made a dream that his dad told him before he died. Justin worked vicariously to clean up any bombs and stuff which took three years. Then it came to the cost. Eventually Justin got the town done. There was only one thing. The Great Lakes of wisdom contained a lot of gold bits.
Emily: during the time Justin was cleaning the water out he found gold bits floating which then he put in his crate. Eventually the first people moved into blocksvile which was known as the small town of waynesvile. Justin did things right and gave people jobs and houses for lost costs and jobs we’re great during the depression. Eventually the Great Lakes we’re opened in 1940 after so much cleaning and when people went there one spotted a yellow spot in the water and said what is that then the person went up to it and picked it up

Emily: then the person said “gold. GOLD?” Which then started a gold rush for years. So many people visited the town just to collect the gold. Which made the town a lot of money just for the people coming. At the time the population was 540. Then suddenly it increased to 1,000 then the next year 10,000 and the next you know. In 1954 a new revolution was born and that was movies. A movie star in the name of Caroline and @wumbojumbo made the first fictional film “Tempus Crystallo” about tc piracy which blew up and it earned millions per day.

tc pirate gets slapped
Albert: can’t you see tc is bad. It destroyed everything. Including us
Person: what are you talking about. Tc is good for your soul
Albert: oh my gosh! No it is not. Tc can destroy servers and ruin Daves money


The movie was so popular it got 3 sequels and a remake in 2018. Many many movies we’re produced at the town until 1990. At that time the population was 1,000,000. In 1964 the town was hit with a big surprise. Somebody wanted to feature it in the news and everywhere of how well it was doing. That gave the town an opportunity to grow even higher becoming the 1st town to earn a time crystal award. In 1986 arcades we’re everywhere which was the gold prize of the town as the population was a mire 10,000,000 people and rising. The arcades we’re so hard on the town it hit 100 billion dollars for the first time. In 1990 the town started to peak as the well known movie star Caroline Johnson was diagnosed with cancer. Which hit the city hard. Many many people threw there money to find a cure for her condition but unfortunately it got to much then in 1991 Caroline Johnson died. The whole town at the time was in tears. Eventually they all got over it but that was the day that city stood still. In 1998 the population numbers decreased to 9,000,000 as there we’re complaints of not enough jobs and that stuff that Justin couldn’t handle it. In the year 2000 the population was hit hard decreasing to 7,000,000. Until in December 31, 2001. The day that changed the city forever when Justin died. Many went into tears as they missed him as he was a great person.

A statue of Justin was built on the Great Lakes to remember his legacy forever. Eventually in 2002 a new Mayer was elected in the name of Caleb. Caleb was not like Justin. He made new rules and that stuff. Eventually crime started going sky high that Caleb had to arrest 10,000 a day. That was known as the downfall of waynesvile. In 2007 Caleb was arrested for counts of spinning blockheads. The towns population in 2007 was at 1,000,000 as so many moved out in that time. 2008 a new Mayor that was nice and caring and doesn’t want to be named moved in. He did things so right he got everything back in control but it was too late. In 2009 he changed the name of waynesvile to blocksvile to fit the name better but that did nothing. Eventually in 2014 the population was at 100,000. It took the town for a surprise. In 2015 the town announced it was going bankrupt. Nothing could save the town at that time. And that was the time the Mayor announced a state of emergency for blocksvile. Then in 2018 they will be announcing that they can no longer be supporting the town anymore and that they will be shutting it down. Ending the waynesvile legacy. A recent earthquake in the town has mainly destroyed a lot of things. I haven’t heard news of anything yet but idk what this will do.


Landon: wow. I’ve never heard such thing. That’s darker then dawn of the war.
Emily: oh. Well I am going to bed. Night Landon
Landon: night Emily <3


The next day
emily wakes up
Emily: what a nice day.
Landon: hello Emily. As you can see I decided to read dawn of the war again.
Emily: okay. I was thinking we should check my place out if it’s not flooded and as I can see the water is gone.
Landon: okay Emily. I’ll come follow you.


A few minutes later
Emily: so this is my house. An apartment complex that is still in tact.
Emily: you can come In.
Landon: I feel like I’m inviting my self into your home.
Emily: you’re not. You are invited into my place. C’mon.
emily opens the door
Emily: oh boy. My apartment!

Emily: this thing took months to move into
Landon: I know how you feel plus earthquakes can be destructive.
Emily: I know but you see. We’ve never had an earthquake in over hundreds of years. And this was a big one.
Landon: c’mon let’s find what could be salvaged.
Emily: well okay.
Landon: wait… I’ll be right back, I need to check the basement.
Emily: okay. I’ll come down if you need
emily and Landon climb down into the basement



Landon: Emily’s diary. No thanks
Emily: I don’t pretty much care if somebody reads it. I barely write into it.
Landon: Emily. I may send a team over to help with the cleanup soon. I’ll be right back
Emily: okay.
Emily: do you think I should read my diary or search my home or run out.

  • Run out
  • Search the apartment
  • Read the diary

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Chapter 3 end


#38

Way too messy.


#39

Turns out I don’t think vote systems can go into one so this idea is dead.

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#40

All chapters may be longer then chapter three or about the same or shorter. I am making the script for chapter 4


#41

Just a reminder: I am going to make some chapters with no transactions because it’s hard to think of some.


#42

a stare into the past chapter four.

Diary

( I was born in 1994 with a condition known as dodolands which causes me to be afraid of dodos of all types. People always made fun of me and put dodos by me when I was in school in 2004 the teacher did not listen to me and then they put a dodo in their room and I couldn’t hold the fear anymore and I screamed so loud and ran out of the room. My mother was sent to drive me home. one day my mother pulled me out of dodo school because of my condition and put me in a new school. that day when I went there I met a friend in the name of Landon who was nice to me and cared for me too. The school was for those infected by dodolands and it prohibited any dodos from coming in Landon while I was 4-5 showed me to the classroom, he gave me lunch money when I forgot my lunch, he also tried his best not to lie to me or the class and we became friends one day he asked me to go to his house to show me his legos. His collection was amazing and well organized. He wanted me to have some but I declined. He had over more then the average person. Landon had over 100,000 legos he got from years of collecting. Even though his parents had 100,000 of the sweet plat coins at the time as heck. on the last day of school in 2010-2012 Landon and I said goodbye to each other as the school year ended and he had to go back to his state. One day my dad was cooking food and then the stove caught fire. we had to run out of the house but my father forgot the dog and he went in to the house to save the dog but… he never came out. We lost everything even mother lost her phones so me and Landon got separated. the next year we moved to another state after living at grandmas for a while. I moved to high school which wasn’t the same as middle. Landon was always in the same school I was because kinder garden was also for older people too. Except for high class. But they had dodos in there and in my older years I took a prescription for dodolands that helped me with dodos just a bit )


This book is unfinished

Emily: oh. That’s sad, I haven’t even thought about this book and somewhat forgot about it because of schoolwork and stuff. Plus this book maybe a bit inaccurate. I’ll just save this in my pocket
emily puts the diary in her pocket
Landon: oh hey Emily.
Emily: I was recently reading my diary and… it described a person in the name of Landon, Are you him?



Landon: this is hard…
Emily: you don’t have to tell. I am fine with it.
another earthquake hits blocksvile
Emily: Crud
Landon: 9.7!
Landon: c’mon. We need to get to griffin land because we can’t stay here.
landon and Emily get up onto the ladder but drops her diary

Landon: leave it behind please. We need to get out of here.
Emily: but… that contains all of my stuff and without it idk what to do.
Landon: just leave it behind. The roof is going to collapse.
Emily: but please.
Landon: this is a situation. The only safest place is griffin land. C’mon.
Emily: fine
landon and Emily walk out as the apartment collapses
Emily: oh my gosh. My apartment.
Landon: c’mon we gotta head to griffin land now. I am trying to save you friend.
Emily: friend?


???: I got you pinned to the locker. Your never getting off. Plus I am putting a dodo on you
Emily: help!
Landon: HEY. STOP PINNING EMILY TO THE LOCKER BULLYS.
???: oh what can you do.
the teacher walks in
???: but how
???: Jeffery. How many times have I told you STOP BULLYING
Jeffery: but… it was Landon
???: no excuses or lies. You are EXPELLED. I am calling your parents to pick you up. Go to the principals office now before I pin you to the wall.
Jeffery: wha- you can’t.
???: oh I can’t
the teacher drags Jeff to the principals office
Emily: thank you Landon
Landon: your welcome. Friend



Landon: Emily?
Landon: Emily!
Emily: what.
the wall collapses
Landon: Emily look out!
landon throws Emily to safety
Emily: wh-what just happened
Landon: we’re you sleeping? The wall almost killed you.
Emily: oh sorry. I just had a moment.
Landon: remember. think and get out first and ask questions later
Emily: oh.
Landon: c’mon. We need to get to griffin land now.
Emily: okay.
the earthquake intensifies to 10.0
Landon: oh dang.
landon throws Emily into the train cart

Landon: I’m just going to put the seat belt on you.
Emily: okay
landon puts fuel into the train
Landon: hold on!
the train runs and goes

Landon: griffin land is only out of this city. 1000 tcs away.
Emily: okay.
Landon: just remember this, when firing a train always put coal
Emily: cliff. CLIFF!
Landon: wha- WOAH!
Landon: hold on. We are going to make a jump

Emily: oh my gosh!
the train makes it to safety
Landon: that’s out of the usual
Emily: what.
Landon: California was hit by a magnitude 9.8 earthquake which is very strong.
Emily: oh my gosh.
Landon: you want to know what was worse
Emily: what
Landon: the crust is rubbing onto itself too much.
Emily: oh no.
Landon: also a new ring of Fire was formed by GRIFFIN LAND and around the east coast
Emily: oh no.
Landon: the world has never seen this happen before. If it keeps happening volcanos could trigger causing super eruptions.
Emily: oh no
Landon: and it’s much worse. The winters could wipe us out entirely and cover the entire world in ash.
Emily: okay
Landon: we need to head to griffin land and meet Albert. He knows a scientist who can help us.
Emily: but Albert left the helicopter.
Landon: well I guess we can go there for old times sake


10 hours later…



Landon: are you up?
Emily: Zzzzz
Landon: um… I’ll just leave you here while I go exploring.
Emily: Huh?
Landon: oh hello sleepy head. Even though it’s dark want to explore.
Emily: you go ahead. I want to sleep in the fright car because I’m cold.
Landon: okay. Have a nice time.
landon walks away


a few minutes later…

Landon: Well I’m here.
Landon: this ancient logo has been here since 2017
noice crepes by
Landon: Huh?
Landon: well. I’m going to head back to the train now.
landon walks back and lands in a trap
Landon: ouch.
???: who are you?
Landon: I’m Landon.
???: okay… what’s your birthday
Landon: you probably shouldn’t know that.
???: okay. My name is Sean.
Landon: okay Sean… then why did you set this trap.
Sean: uggh
Landon: you seem hurt
Sean: I am and all because of the riots of 2017. When 1.7 came a month later riots started forming.
Sean: also. This city griffin land isn’t what you seem
Sean: Griffin land is known for a daily purge, every night.
Landon: oh. If I never knew that I would have been dead. Thank you though
Sean: your welcome
a group walk of 2 people walk by

???: well well we’ll look what we have here. People
???: should we kill them?
???: sure. I want to kill some blockheads for changing the credit system
Landon: RUN!!
Sean: I see a train. I think we can hide there
Landon: good idea! Let’s go.
landon and Sean run to the train
Sean: duck and stay quiet
Landon: okay.


???: where’d those losers go.
???: dang it. They got away. Let’s just find somebody else.


Sean: okay. Well I guess this is goodnight Landon.
Landon: I’ll see you in the morning.
Sean: night.
sean puts a blanket that blends into the train on them.


The next day.

Landon: Sean, Emily. Wake up.
Emily: Huh? What happened.
Emily: WOAH who is this Landon?
Landon: I met him while at the logo. His name is Sean, sean say hello to Emily.
Sean: hi there Emily, I am Sean.
Landon: c’mon we need to get to the “thing” before we get in trouble.
The both: okay
landon, emily and Sean walk off to find it

Chapter four end

  • A stare into the past is great
  • nice enough
  • don’t like it ( please tell me why you don’t like it )
  • I don’t know ( please describe how you like it in reply or pm )

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sorry for the long and depressing wait but I hope to releasing them in less from the current week. I am going to try to when I have the urge to write which does come up. since this chapter didn’t have any transactions every time one doesn’t have a transaction I may post what should happen during it and there will be a transaction in every chapter.

I am thinking of working on a server for every few chapters so next one you may get a chance to have your server featured but don’t expect the set to be “fancy” like it may seem. :slight_smile:

here’s a transaction you can do for episode 5.

should the group go to the “thing” or search around griffin land?

  • Search around griffin land
  • Go to the “thing”

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edit: btw if you want your server featured just reply with your server name and when you think i should come ( this will be changed at any time ) and ill consider it.


#43

expect chapter 5 at least tomorrow or around that time.

ill give you a hint: it has to involve with mjs


#44

Nobody requested their server to be on the series so I am giving one more chapter a chance for your server to be in. You don’t have too though. Now back to the story :slight_smile:

A stare into the past chapter five


walking is heard


Emily: how are we going to find this portal thingy?
Landon: I um… actually haven’t been to griffin land since 2014 and forgot where it was to majic Jungle.
Landon: it needs a special crystal or time crystals and it requires 700 time crystals to reactivate for 7 days.
Emily: oh.
Sean: I think I can help you.
Landon: how many do you have
Sean: I have 1000 I collected at my favorite world before it migrated two days ago.
Sean: anyway you can have them because I don’t need tc, I used to be a pirate.
Landon: oh. Being a pirate is bad, I once was a pirate and I got attacked by the admin and got sent to the multiplayer prison.
The both: oh.
Sean: how is your job at majic Jungle
Landon: not bad at least. I applied for a job after I learned my lesson and got unbanned.
Landon: Dave and milla are actually good people.
Sean: has Dave done anything bad before.
Landon: a few times, one time he got so annoyed he banned some person and that person was a great builder.
Sean: oh.
Emily: Sean, what is your story.
Landon: Emily…
Sean: Landon, it’s fine. I always get that question when meeting new friends.
Sean: I really don’t like telling my past because I feel so bad about it and… people hated me for it. I was a movie producer
Landon: what happened.
Sean: I’m afraid you may hate me for it
Emily: c’mon please, We were just wondering.
Sean: well… I guess I could tell


Sean: this is actually… a bit hard to say gulp
Sean: when I began as a small person, I made a little short that made fun of the green screen by doing weird things. I didn’t know that some liked it and other blockheads didn’t.
Sean: somebody saw my little film and hired me to play as the same character, Jerry. In dawn of the war.
Sean: even though at that time my name was actually Jerry. Dawn of the war was quite a flop of a blockhead film and gained low ratings.
Sean: another person hired me to play in another green screen film that flopped badly.
Sean: eventually the past got up to me from dawn of the war assuaging characters and stuff and I became hated by millions of blockheads. So I went off the grid and changed my name to Sean or as you say it “Shawn”.
Sean: I hope that… nobody makes the same mistakes and stuff like I did in the past.


Emily: it’s okay, Sean.
Sean: I know, I-it’s just so h-hard to face people again. I-I’m just so afraid.
Landon: look, I know we make mistakes in the past but it’s just best to move on and focus on the future.
Sean: idk what I would have done without you guys. It’s been so long since I have gotten attention by anybody.
Emily: I think we have made it to our destination while talking.
Landon: we can’t use the front door because there is a guard right on the door so we have to use the pool.
Emily: okay.
swimming could be heard

landon opens the door
Landon: c’mon. We need to be extra quiet.
Emily: why?
Landon: shh, The guards.

Landon: this place actually had a long history.
Landon: it was my house and my path to majic Jungle before I got banned for something I didn’t do,
Landon: c’mon…
the three move quietly
???: Zzzzzz…
cracking noice could be heard
???: Huh?
???: stupid kids…
the guard goes back to sleep
Landon: see that’s why you have to be quiet.
landon pulls a map out of his pocket.
Landon: okay this is the path we have to go up on.

Landon: so we have to go up the ladder to the third floor then we have to pass into the near top then we have to get right onto the top then Sean, you give me the tc.
Sean: yes sir.
sean drops 700 tcs
Landon: not now… I meant up there
Sean: oh… sorry
a guard wakes up
???: Huh?
???: I heard tc.
a guard walks by Landon and them
Landon: shh…
???: seems fine.
???: who is that?
Landon: CRUD!
sean could be heard eating chips
Landon: RUN!
???: WE GOT PEOPLE, GET THE BAN HAMMER!
all the guards wake up
Landon: WHAT THE HECK SEAN.
Sean: sorry.
Landon: now we are all dead. I don’t mean to yell but you could have done that later
Sean: I’m sorry
Landon: it’s fine.
Emily: what are we going to do now
Landon: idk
the guards and the ban hammer approaches.
Landon: whelp… I guess this is it
shots could be heard
???: GUARDS RUN, A SHOT HAS BEEN HEARD.
the guards run to safety
Landon: they left something behind.
landon grabs the ban hammer
Landon: I’ll keep that to ban people that get in my way but not you Sean. Your fine
Sean: thank gosh.
???: hello.
Emily: who are you?
???: milla, I heard you we’re planning to stop the earthquake.
Landon: MILLA! It’s been a long time.
Milla: Landon. How’s life been?
Landon: good so far.
Milla: I was just checking by but we should really get to the top. C’mon
Landon: okay.
Emily: are you sure, she could be a hazard.
Landon: I’ve known her since the dawn of her job.
Landon: she is one of the nicer while respected admins around.
landon and them climb the ladder
???: is it okay. Good
???: dang, they got away.
???: we will figure this out guard but for now stay down.
???: yes Dave.
Dave: what have I told you about calling me Dave, call me MajicDave


An hour later…
warping is heard

Milla: welcome to majic Jungle
Emily: wow, I’ve never seen… such thing.
Milla: I know.
Sean: what is this?
Milla: oh, that’s me and Dave in the sunset at the beach as a tsunami came to us.
Sean: how’d you survive.
Milla: oh, we had to get in a helicopter quickly before June hit.
Landon: what’s June?
Milla: it was known as the strongest hurricane ever with speeds of 1000 miles.
Emily: YIKES!
Milla: it brought a tsunami up to 320 feet that swept half of the us and killed almost 100,000 people.
Landon: oh my gosh.
computers are heard

Emily: what are those.
Milla: the computers that run the cloud, And you.
Emily: I’m a simulation?
Milla: no silly, this is how our world works.
Milla: our world is powered by 1700 omega computers all having over 1 infinity of the times of omega bytes as a single quantum computer calculated at numbers of 170 million trillion and have incredible speeds of up to 10 to the power of infinity running blockheads all at once.
Emily: wow… that’s a lot
computer blows out
Milla: crud, one of the cloud computers blew for China.
milla grabs the talkie
Milla: code 124c01 we got a blow out.
???: on it.
Emily: wow. What are the codes for.
Milla: oh for example if one of the computers blow out the codes are to where the computer is and it shows on the circuit if I’m not here.
signal comes in
Milla: oh… I got a message of somebody. It will be a minute.
Landon: okay.
Milla: what? He did what, oh he is getting banned.
milla takes care of the person
Milla: sorry about that, I get messages about every ten minutes of my work shift.
Emily and Sean: okay.
Milla: the co worker watching earthquake and world activity will need tou guys in a second. If you want me just say @ Milla and then I’ll teleport to your location. I’ll see you later :slight_smile:
milla walks away
???: hello :slight_smile:
Landon: hi
Emily: hi.
???: my name is paper.
Emily: hi paper.
Paper: what’s your names.
Emily: Landon, me and Sean.
Paper: okay.
the 4 walk into the room

Paper: so… this is the map of the tech tonic plates.
Emily: okay.
Paper: due to recent activity a new tech tonic plate has formed and started shaking the east coast. Which I should danger for that part as massive earthquakes are causing other plates to shift and move causing earthquakes around the world.

Landon: okay.
Paper: so here’s how we are going to fix this.
Paper: Landon, Emily, Sean, I need you to go to the ocean. There is a temple down there that leads to the place something odd is going on. I need you to get things back in order and stop the tech tonic plates before they collide with others and cause massive world wide earthquakes THAT if gone wrong there will be super eruptions which will kill us off with the nuclear winters and stuff.
Paper: currently the armor to get down there is not available and we can’t just summon items like that because Dave would kill us. I need somebody to ge the materials to get the armor made and ready.
Paper: who’s with me?
Landon, Emily and Sean: I am.
Paper: okay, I call for LANDON to get the materials, Emily to search for the rarest of rocks and Sean to get me a pet dodo.
Sean: why me.
Paper: because… I’m lonely without a pet :frowning:
Sean: ugh… fine.
Paper: I now call you off right now.
Landon, Emily and Sean: YES SIR.


What material should the armor be made of

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  • Carbon fiber

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Chapter five end

About almost half the time of the last chapter but I’m trying my best :slight_smile:

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#45

doesn’t seem to be good. maybe suggest any ideas of making a good story?


#46

I have updated the op slightly.

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#47

SZlove it